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PANEL 1
COMMANDER MIKEALE'S OFFICE - BIRD'S EYE VIEW - WELL LIT BY BULBS
SHOT - LARGE CABIN SPACE WITH STIFF ARMLESS CHAIRS A HEAVY OAK DESK
CLUTTERED WITH FOLDERS AND PADDS (LONGER FLATTER P.D.A.S) BEHIND DESK IS A
VIDSCREEN SHOWING SURROUNDING SPACE
Action Julie and Bilail are trying to convince Mikeale (simian
jackal) to send Selkay home and send their ship the "LONG ODDS" They
stand close together with their tails and pinkies hooked together
face towards the jackal who looks a little mad.
BILAIL
Open your ears Gov...! She is from
Loam. We better get her out of 'ear
afore 'er friends come and change us to
newts!
MIKEALE
Listen Up! I'm not going to run this
outfit based on wild rumors about the
'magical' land of Loam. You follow!?
JULIE
Sir Dusa Steele is not a fairy tale and
if Lenny can reinforce the spacefleet
with plating made of it we're dead
meat. Let me take my crew and see what
we can find out. Ms. Volpone has
powerful friends who are not going to
be happy with Mysaki Exports.
MIKEALE
That's different. APPROVED! Now get
out. Dis ......Missed!
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PANEL 1
AZREAL'S ROOM - MEDIUM SHOT - MANY CANDLES LIGHT
SHOT - SMALL CABIN WOMEN'S LACY BLACK AND WHITE CLOTHING STREWN ABOUT.
SILK SHEETS ON BED AND SATIN PILLOWS.
Action - Bilail sits on the bed holding and stroking Selkay's hand.
Selkay kneels on the floor naked and upset.
BILAIL
...Sent All Loamans home. So I thought
you were gone and Enroute to safety.
Kyle needed to get here double time. I
am so sorry. We'll 'ave a jolly trip
home with me druggs. Maybe we can visit
Sumer TM.
SELKAY
I've got all my memories back. I don't
want to suck every dick I smell. But I
can't put on clothes? I tried but it's
like I'm not supposed to be dressed it
feels 'wrong'.
BILAIL
Last bit o' drug in you.
PANEL 2
BASE CAFETERIA - CLOSE SHOT - BRIGHT LIGHTS
SHOT - SIDE VIEW DOWN LENGTH OF TABLE. JULIE; BILAIL; AND AZREAL (JULIE
CLOSEST) SIT ON ONE SIDE CHARLIE TWOCLOUDS (MALE COYOTE) ON THE OTHER SIDE
COFFEE CUPS ON TABLE.
Action - The girls discuss their up coming trip with Julie's guy and
the best pilot in the pirate fleet. Julie has a bare foot between his
legs and he's massaging it.
JULIE
We poor wee lasses might get lost if
big strong Chuckie doesn't drive. You
know how pissed Doc Long would be if
his old ship...
CHARLIE
Okay 'miss pussyfoot' I'll drive. What
is this about going skyclad for the
whole trip?
BILAIL
'Ay dogsbody; Don't tell me you mind
watching 3 ... No; 4 nubile young
things prancing around naked as you
please. It'll make Selkay more comfy
till she can dress.
AZREAL
If she can't dress when we hit Summer;
all bets are out.
PANEL 3
SPACE DOCK LOWEST LEVEL OF PIRATE BASE - WIDE SHOT SIDE VIEW (ACROSS PAGE)
- WELL LIT BY LARGE KLEGS
SHOT - SPACE RAIDERS ( 1 OR 2 FURSON STAR CRAFT) TRANSPORTS ( LARGE SHIPS)
SMALL FREIGHTERS (LARGER) ON DOCKING FLOOR. TUBES LEAD TO CRUISERS AND
BATTLESHIPS (LARGEST) OUTSIDE. NEAREST SHIP "THE LONG ODDS" ON IT'S SIDE
RAMP LEADING TO DOOR.
Action - Roger holding a bag at his crotch; Azreal; Julie; Charlie;
Selkay and Bilail walk single file all nude as the repair crews and
pilots stare. Selkay looks doubtful and sad; Roger looks embarrassed;
everyone else is happy and excited
PANEL 4
JULIE'S CABIN ABOARD THE LONG ODDS - LOW ANGLE - MEDIUM LIGHTING
SHOT - THIN BED WITH THICK MATTRESS; ATTACHED TO WALL SUPPORTED BY STURDY
METAL LEGS BOLTED TO THE FLOOR. SHELVES WITH MESH DOORS FULL OF BOOKS.
WIDE DRESSER WITH BOOKS PILED UP AND CUPS AND PLATES. ONE TOP DRAW OPEN
WITH UNDIES HANGING OUT.
Action - Selkay sits on the bed next to a short flowery dress with
buttons down the front looking sad and watching Julie who is standing
with a tray of food trying to look harmless and friendly.
JULIE
Here's some good food. Roger cooked it;
not me. We got off on the wrong foot. I
didn't give you the respect I should
any furr. I'm really sorry. Once you
get to know me I'm a real...
SELKAY
Pussycat?
JULIE
Ha. Yes. Try to get dressed but don't
push it.
PANEL 5 (SMALL)
JULIE'S CABIN ABOARD THE LONG ODDS - CLOSE UP - MEDIUM LIGHTING
SHOT - JUST SELKAY'S FACE
Action - Selkay face brimming with tears
SELKAY (T.B.)
Maybe I'm going home.
PANEL 6
JULIE'S CABIN ABOARD THE LONG ODDS - CLOSE SHOT - MEDIUM LIGHTING
SHOT JUST THE BED AND BOTH GIRLS FROM WHERE THEY'RE SEATED
Action - Julie and Selkay are embracing. Selkay is sobbing Julie is
massaging her back.
PANEL 7
PILOTING SECTION OF SHIP - MEDIUM SHOT - BRIGHT STAR AND DASH LIGHTS
SHOT - CONTROL ROOM OF LONG ODDS RETRO SCI-FI LOOK
Action - Selkay buttoning up her dress walks in on Julie and Charlie
flying united. He's seated in the pilots chair and she's facing
forward riding his cock and piloting the ship
SELKAY
Franny... Bilail said you were in here.
Look I'm all better.
JULIE
That's ....... Great....... We're kind
of busy right now.
SELKAY
You always fly like that?
JULIE
Only on good days!
PANEL 8
ARRIVAL/CUSTOMS ON SUMER TM - SIDE VIEW - VERY BRIGHT LIGHTS
SHOT - LARGE ROOM WITH UNIFORMED OFFICERS BEHIND COUNTERS CHECKING
'PAPERS' AND LUGGAGE OF FURRS AND ALIENS
Action - Villa (skunk in uniform) is leading Julie, Selkay, Bilail
and Azreal last single file straight through customs.
(V.O.)
They received VIP treatment
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PANEL 1
PACKY'S BAR - LONG SHOT - PINK AND PURPLE NEON LIGHT BRIGHTER AROUND
BARTENDER.
SHOT - GARISH SALOON WITH TABLES ATTACHED TO FLOOR AND MINI STAGES
SCATTERED ABOUT.
Action - Tara (skunk in mini dress and halter top) Is sitting with
the girls in bright short low cut dresses. Packy (male elephant) is
serving them drinks
JULIE
...So Now whenever we come here we get
special treatment. Are you OK foxy
lady?
SELKAY
Oh I'm fine just need to use the
facilities...
AZREAL
I'll go with
PACKY
You girls wanna dance for the drinks?
Otherwise who's paying?
BILAIL
I'll pay
PANEL 2
LADIES ROOM PACKY'S BAR - MEDIUM SHOT - PINK AND PURPLE NEON LIGHT
SHOT SMALL ROOM BEIGE PAINTED METAL WALLS WITH GRAFFITI; SINKS; MIRRORS;
TWO STALLS. ONE DOOR LESS AND BACKED UP; THE OTHER OCCUPIED. TAWNY CAT
PAWS WITH PINK PANTIES AROUND HER ANKLES VISIBLE UNDER DOOR.
Action - Azreal smooths her hair in the mirror while Selkay rattles
the stall door. The Somali cat Amelie is in no hurry to vacate the
bowl.
AMELIE
Hold your fucking horses Bitch. I'll be
out when I'm....
SELKAY
BITCH! Did you just call me bitch? You
worthless pussy shit!
PANEL 3
LADIES ROOM PACKY'S BAR - CLOSE UP - PINK AND PURPLE NEON LIGHT
SHOT - JUST THE STALL DOOR AND SELKAY'S FOOT
Action - Selkay smashes the door in with her foot splinters fly
everywhere.
(SFX) -- KRAK!
PANEL 4
LADIES ROOM PACKY'S BAR - HIGH ANGLE SHOT - PINK AND PURPLE NEON LIGHT
SHOT - LOOKING DOWN ON BATHROOM FLOOR. UNWASHED MULTICOLOED TILES.
DISCARDED MAKE UP AND CRUMPLED PAPER TOWELS.
Action - Selkay is sitting on Amelie holding bits of the cats' torn
red dress in her fist. Amelie's panties are still around her ankles.
Amelie is starting to change into a full cat.
SELKAY
You picked the wrong 'bitch' to mess
with pussy fart. Volpones can hold
their own.
SELKAY (T.B.)
I had so much anger pent up it's good
to let some out. Poor kitty. Wait she's
from Loam?
AMELIE
That collar... You're one of Alcoa's...
How? I'm out of here!
AMELIE (T.B.)
Got to tell the boss!
PANEL 5
PACKY'S BAR - LOW ANGLE - PINK AND PURPLE NEON LIGHT
SHOT - LARGE DOOR WAY WITH HIGH SILL; BOTTOM HALF
Action - Amelie in cat form runs out of the bar.
PANEL 6
NATALIE'S OFFICE - WIDE SHOT - OVERHEAD LIGHTING
SHOT - NATALIE'S DESK PILED WITH PAPERS; PADDS A PLATE WITH A HALF EATEN
SANDWICH AND A LARGE COFFEE CUP. SOFT LEATHER HIGHBACKED CHAIR WITH GAP
FOR TAIL ON HER SIDE. TWO LESS COMFORTABLE ALL METAL SEATS ON OTHER SIDE
Action - Reynolds Mysaki (ring-tailed lemur; tall and thinner than
Alcoa in a frock coat and sash across his silk shirted chest) Is
wagging a finger under Commander Fenkirk's face. Natalie (Snow
leopard in uniform) looks him straight in the eye.
REYNOLDS
I demand you arrest this Veselka
Volpone. She's a former Mysaki employee
who is wanted for industrial espionage
on Dusa. The Loaman trade delegation
also requests you search 'The Long
Odds' for Mysaki Exports property she
was last in possession of.
NATALIE
I can't take her off a Geode ship
without a warrant from Geode. Sorry.
And I will never under any
circumstances board Doc Long's ship
with armed guards. You know who he is?
REYNOLDS
An old meddler. OK just send her home.
Dusa will give her a very warm welcome.
PANEL 7
AIRLOCK LEADING TO LONG ODDS - CLOSE SHOT - BRIGHT LIGHT
SHOT - AIRLOCK WITH PAINTED LETTERS AND NUMBERS AND A SMALL SCREEN SHOWING
"DOCKING BAY L4 R3 #2342" "LONG ODDS - GEODE"
Action- Bilail with a wicked grin stands outside the airlock talking
to Amelie in a new red dress and dark glasses.
AMELIE
I would like to ask your passenger some
questions in order to process her
immigration papers. She can't debark at
Dusa unless she has a return visa.
BILAIL
Nuh Uh! Ya drippy twit. 'Course she
can. Take off before I take you off or
better yet... Step onto Geode soil;
figuratively; where we can do anything
we want ta ya...
AMELIE
Not in this lifetime. Whatever you got
planned... It won't work.
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PANEL 1
WARD ROOM ON THE LONG ODDS - MEDIUM SHOT - MEDIUM LIGHTING
SHOT - DOORWAY AND TABLE HALF THE ROOM OR LESS (JUST ENOUGH TO SHOW
ACTION)
Action - Julie and Charlie are embracing while Selkay and Azreal look
on.
CHARLIE
I know Dusa port. I'm not a pretty
girl...
JULIE
You'd make a cute one.
CHARLIE
...I'll Take a packet ship then a
frigate and contact Ms. Volpone's
family and they'll get her diplomatic
immunity or sneak...
JULIE
The first Loaman I met was named Sneak.
CHARLIE
....her on board a ship to Midgardon.
PANEL 2
WARD ROOM ON THE LONG ODDS - CLOSE UP - MEDIUM LIGHTING
Action - Charlie and Julie kiss goodbye long and deep.
PANEL 3
REYNOLDS MYSAKI'S OFFICE - MEDIUM SHOT - WELL LIT
SHOT - POLISHED TEAK WOOD DESK WITH JUST A TRAY OF GLASSES AND A CARAFE
PLUS AN INTERCOM. PLUSH RED VELVET HIGH BACKED CHAIR ON ONE SIDE AND
STUDDED LOW BACKED RED LEATHER CHAIRS ON THE OTHER. PICTURE OF MOUNT
PELEAE (VOLCANO) HANGS ON ONE WALL.
Action - Reynolds in velvet chair and Amelie sitting on the edge of
his desk facing him discuss strategy He has his hand between her
spread legs. Her red dress is hiked above her waist and her panties
are around her ankles. She has a black eye.
AMELIE
OOOOOH! SIR! The message to the
chairman has been sent with the next
packet ship. They'll be ready when his
sextoy tries to go home. AAAHHHH! Sir
does this mean you still like me.
YOWWWWWLL!
REYNOLDS
You're my best kitty. And juicy too.
It's better this way. Reardon my sick
little son will show her what it means
to betray the Mysaki clan! Hold still
I'm going to use my whole hand.
SFX -- SQUISH!
AMELIE
Thank you Sir.
PANEL 4
WARD ROOM ON THE LONG ODDS - MEDIUM SHOT - MEDIUM LIGHTING
SHOT - COFFEE MAKER IN CORNER OF ROOM
Action - Roger and Doc Long stand by coffee talking
ROGER
Sir when did you get on board?
DOC LONG
Just arrived. Heard the girls got into
a bar room brawl? I feel I may be
needed on Loam.
PANEL 5
SHOWERS ON LONG ODDS - LONG SHOT - STEAMY
SHOT - TILED FLOOR SLANTING TO DRAIN IN MIDDLE. JETS OF HOT WATER FROM
ABOVE.
Action - Azreal and Julie all lathered up rub Selkay from front and
back while Bilail shampoos her hair. They're all giggling and having
a great time
JULIE
This is something we learned in the
spacefleet...giggle. Charlie says I'm
his best loofah.
BILAIL
You really licked that pussy last
night.
SELKAY
Licking pussy feels good. I feel good;
for the first time in weeks; I feel
GREAT!
PANEL 6
ABOARD THE INVICTUS ON THE VAST SEA - MEDIUM SHOT - DAYTIME
SHOT - LOOKING ONTO SHIP FROM THE RAILING INTO THE GALLEY
Action Charlie stands at the railing of a wooden sailing ship as
Kalam stands in the porthole of her galley
CHARLIE (T.B.)
This is a long voyage; how shall I pass
the time? Kata?
KALAM
Offworld Canis latrans? Would you be
disposed too assist a damsel in
distress I have need of a volunteer.
CHARLIE (T.B.)
A spotted cat? Maybe......
(inset)
To be continued...
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